1) Elevator pitch (part 2):
https://youtu.be/vhXqFq1LlVY
Citation:
https://health.gov/dietaryguidelines/dga2005/toolkit/healthfacts/safefood.htm
2) Everyone that gave me feed back was on board with my elevator pitch. They understood the need and liked my product. They agreed that ice and icepacks don't last long.
3) based on my feedback, I decided to talk more about the negatives to the use of a normal lunchbox. This allowed me to show my audience that not only is my product beneficial, but it can keep you from getting sick!
Melanie,
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you received good feedback on your last elevator pitch. Positive comments are always rewarding and inspire us to keep working hard. For this pitch I found that you were not only very comfortable in front of the camera but you also seemed to be very well rehearsed. One thing I really commend you on is your enunciation. I was able to hear everything you had to say very clearly. Good job!